Poor Kelton, destined to be rejected by Miss Rose here.
Hum, I wonder if she’d ever make a move on Vicious… probably not.
Vicious always seems too busy being perfect.
… Speaking of Vicious, what happened to the whole ‘apprentice’ thing? Why isn’t she in jolly on England?
I really like this page. It reminds me of a story I did a while back.
I’m going to say though that the Sera’s face in the last panel bothers me. It doesn’t seem to fit for some reason. That and on the last page, the first two panels have a strange flow. I think there needs to be a gap, otherwise it looks like it’s just one big page.
Eh, just some comments by mwa, otherwise nice job like always.
I kind of agree with ITE. But not about that earlier issue. I mean about the last expression. No offense, and it’s really nothing, but it seems more sad than inquisitive. Nothing too bad, just my opinion.
Other than that, the part where Sera talks about the German witch’s boyfriend in the TV was funny. “Why are you in my home, Kelton?” Great job on this and Goodbye Crestfallen.
A fresh new page to start the day. This is gonna be a good day.
Also an interesting look into the creations witches are able to conjure. Imaginations the limit.
Because he love you. Duh.
Poor Kelton, destined to be rejected by Miss Rose here.
Hum, I wonder if she’d ever make a move on Vicious… probably not.
Vicious always seems too busy being perfect.
… Speaking of Vicious, what happened to the whole ‘apprentice’ thing? Why isn’t she in jolly on England?
Ah it feels good to be looking at good old Sera again. Life is good.
To answer Sid, I believe at the beginning Sera said she was moving to England next Wednesday.
Funny, the main sticker on Kelton’s backpack was also the subject of my senior thesis in college.
“Operations in Saudi Arabia–”
What? What operations!? What is happening?! Mr. A, you TEASE!!
Our friend Mr. Hardwell sure does love them pencils…
Why indeed, Kelton?!
I really like this page. It reminds me of a story I did a while back.
I’m going to say though that the Sera’s face in the last panel bothers me. It doesn’t seem to fit for some reason. That and on the last page, the first two panels have a strange flow. I think there needs to be a gap, otherwise it looks like it’s just one big page.
Eh, just some comments by mwa, otherwise nice job like always.
Err–I mean, page 12! Page 12’s first two panels, I mean…not page 13.
Tcha. ^___^ “Why are you in my home?”
It’s a little thing, I know, but… golly Mr A, I sure do like hanging out with these folks again (:
I kind of agree with ITE. But not about that earlier issue. I mean about the last expression. No offense, and it’s really nothing, but it seems more sad than inquisitive. Nothing too bad, just my opinion.
Other than that, the part where Sera talks about the German witch’s boyfriend in the TV was funny. “Why are you in my home, Kelton?” Great job on this and Goodbye Crestfallen.
wow. i wish i could blow up a TV D:
keep up the good work ^___^
That Sera, she’s just inscrutable sometimes.
Her eyes are a lot different. More accented.
loving the subtle “his boyfriend” thats the way life should be.
i love how kelton just randomly shows up in sera’s house. and sera doesn’t freak out or anything, just a “so why’re you in my house again?”